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Just something I came up with

Please enjoy also I will give a prize -> request  to anyone who can recognise that line, you know which one I'm talking about ^^

Good luck~

Please tell me what you think~

You were working at the café that had recently employed you. You enjoyed doing it because you liked talking to people, interacting in general. Also being the only girl bartender you got a lot of attention. From drunks mostly, lots of young men flirting blatantly with you.

In fact one very pushy blond one was at this very moment, also he sounded French. You were getting progressively more flustered as you were trying to kindly refuse him as well as serving the rest of your clients.

"Alright already! She said no, so can you please stop distracting our employee from her job!" A loud voice told the man, who sulked, but pushed away from the bar to get back to his two friends who were laughing like maniacs at him.

You looked up in gratitude. "Thanks Den." "No prob." Denmark poured some beer from the tap and handed it over to his own client. "You know you really should be firmer with guys like that." You clenched the dishrag in your hand.

"I know. I just, I don't really want to hurt anyone's feelings...." He sighed. "You're hopeless..." You bowed your head. "That is a nice thing about you though. Not wanting to hurt anyone I mean."

"Eh?" Denmark was blushing? Wait. DENMARK WAS BLUSHING!! How the hell?! I mean you thought he didn't even have it in him to be humble or well feel any emotion or than superiority and here he was. The self-proclaimed King of the North, who was blushing!
You blinked in your daze and smiled warmly. To be honest, he should blush more often. He was much cuter that way.

You stroked his cheek, which was quite a bit higher than your own. "Thank you~" you cooed at him. He flushed even darker and was about to say something when a customer called for you.

"Be right there~" you sang as you walked up to collect your order. Dammit! He thought, it'll have to wait for later...

"Finally~" You stretched your arms. Your shift had ended as well as the opening times. Humming to yourself you went along the different tables, announcing it was closing time. The people who were left, got up after downing their drinks.

You stood at the door, happily telling them to be careful on their way home. The Frenchman clutched your hands to his chest as he passed you.

"Good night, sweet Maiden of the Golden Ale!" He said loudly, getting down on his knee as if to serenade you. It made you giggle slightly. Denmark noted this and frowned a bit at the sight of the grinning Frenchie.

As he was about to take you away from him, his two friends pulled him up and wrapping their arms around his waist to keep him up, they left loudly singing and talking.
Denmark sighed in relief.  

You smiled after them and as you saw that the place was empty you shut the door. You went back behind the counter to hang up your apron. Fiddling with your hair to get it down from the loose bun, you bit your lip in frustration.

Suddenly you felt cool hands descend upon yours. They easily slipped the hair band off and fluffed your hair up slightly as it flowed down over your shoulders.

"Thanks Den." You felt his strong arms wrap around you, making you blush. "D-Den?" He rested his head on your shoulder, smelling your hair. "(y/n)?" "Yes?" "Can I ask you something?"

Your breath hitched in your throat. Was he going to- "S-sure. Whatever you want." "Hmm. Do you promise to answer it whole-hardheartedly? No matter what it is?" "Wha-what's with the pop-quiz Den? What's up?"

He didn't answer you for a moment, just relishing the fact that now, you were in his arms. You could feel a fast thumping on your back. His heartbeat, you realized.

"Do you like me?" His question took you by surprise. "Of, of course I like you. Den, I don't understand-" "How much?" He demanded, a sort of child-like tinge in his voice.

"You've been drinking from the tap again haven't you?! Look," you wriggled out of his grasp and held your hands about a foot apart," this is how much I like you."

Good lord, I can't believe I'm actually doing this. "Only that much?" You cocked your head. "I like you this much." He stretched out his arms completely and pouted at you. You flushed red.

"In other words...," he covered his mouth with his hand," I love you." Each word he said, got gradually quieter as he got more and more embarrassed.  

"Den-" "Mathias. Call me Mathias." You smiled at him and took advantage of his stretched out arms. You held him tightly against you. "Mathias, I-I love you too..." You mumbled into his chest.

His happiness overflowed and he rubbed your back gently. He had heard you, but he feigned innocence as he blinked and frowned.  

"Sorry~ didn't catch that last part, oh sweet Maiden of the golden Ale~ Care to repeat it?" He grinned widely. You growled.

"Oh great King of the North," you proclaimed," I, maiden of the golden Ale, am telling you, you are my love." You grinned after saying this in a very regal old-fashioned voice.

He smiled and buried his face in your hair. "I love you so much." He breathed in your scent and lifted his face to gaze into your eyes. His eyes were filled with adoration as he nuzzled his face into your cheek, then gently brushing his lips against your own.

He repeated," So damn much."
Just something I came up with ^^

As I said before the person who can recognize THAT line gets a big hug and a request from me >D

Please enjoy, tell me what you think about it and guess
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Randomestusername Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  New Deviant
Denmark's love + LOTR reference= heart beat increases by 100 % and about to explode. 
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Whybot221 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 20, 2015
Love it so cute:D
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THEHERO32647 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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AngelWithANerfGun Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHEN I READ THE TITLE I READ IT IN THAT HOBBIT'S VOICE AND I PICTURED MISS ROSIE STANDING THERE AND OMG I LOVE LORD OF THE RINGS I'M FREAKING OUT OHMAISWEETFRECKLEDJESUS
//FANGIRLING INTENSIFIES
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lord of the rings~


I also loved the story!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed! And I'm very happy to hear it!
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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Violettathehedgehog Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lord of the Rings. A random- and very drunk- Hobbit, gets on one knee and says to Rosie Cotton, Sam's crush, "Sweet Maiden of the Golden ale." Sam grumbles out a "Oui, watch who yer sweet talkin'!" And Frodo assures him that, "Rosie knows an idiot when she sees one." The scene ends with Sam muttering, "Does she?" It is one of my favorite shire scenes.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is a very good scene! C:
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Violettathehedgehog Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I seriously LOVE that scene.
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Andi-Tiucs Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
First thing that popped in my mind when I saw the title was LORD OF THE RINGS, ironically I was listening to the soundtrack
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shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
How is that ironic? It's amazing!
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Andi-Tiucs Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It sure is amazing :D 
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TheHetareOne Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist
SWEET!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Fluffybunny605 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
IT'S SO FLUFFY
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Fluffybunny605 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Your welcome!!!
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The-Dreaming-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
The line "Goodnight, sweet maiden of the golden ale" from lord of the rings. I believe it was said by a random (drunk?) hobbit (who was leaving The Green Dragon) to Rosie Cotton, making Sam upset.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're completely right!
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The-Dreaming-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Yay! I haven't seen the movie in a while, so I figured i was wrong.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Ineru Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Yooouuuu! Everytime i read a good Nordic-Fanfiction, it's from you!
This is creepy :D It seems impossible for you to write crappy stuff, doesn't it?
Well done story!
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shihachii Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy to hear you say that lovey! Thank you >\\\\\\<
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saskiarijkens Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
so cute x3
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shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks lovey!
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
LOTR?

Great story! Almost makes me wish I were a bartender and not a professor!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed! Well done!


You're a professor? That's pretty damn amazing!
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Yeah. My husband is a world culture teacher and I am a English and Chorus teacher.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That sounds great! I'd like to be an English teacher too ^^
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Yea it is amazing! We are doing short stories so I allow fanfics to be submitted to me.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now that's the kind of teacher I want!

Psssh~ my english teacher is pretty bad... and it makes it worse that I'm in Belgium and I'm English... Sometimes she doesn't understand me when I speak....
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
That sucks. For some reason, a lot of students and teachers have crushes on me. I just love it when my husband gets jealous and wraps his arm around me.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aaaw that's so sweet! And I'd love something like that to happen to me, you're very lucky to have your husband as he is to have you ^^
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IcelandReMartin Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
LOTR??!!! :'DDD
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shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yush!!
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IcelandReMartin Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
WOOO DO I GET A CUPCAKE? XD
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shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If you want to have one ^^
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IcelandReMartin Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
xD I feel smart.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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MultiColoredSceneCat Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Photographer
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shihachii Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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ceciliethehedgehog Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
.//////. so cute
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shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nyaaah :3

Thank you very much ^^

I take it your a bit of a Denmark fan?
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ceciliethehedgehog Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
yes i am :) but i also live in him (sound so wrong)
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shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's alright ^^

I know what you mean >.<
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shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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ceciliethehedgehog Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
but the worse is, i live in his lower region, i live on a island
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shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well that's still pretty cool you know?

Better than Belgium in any case.....

So you can speak Danish then, I presume ^^
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