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Click, click, click. Your eyes were trained on the metal rungs of the whisk which sounded on the earthenware mixing bowl with each dexterous flick of his wrist. Pale but sturdy arms were sticking out of rolled-up sleeves, the front of the shirt covered by a comically flowered apron. White flour and sugar crystals and flecks or molten butter clung stubbornly to his skilled fingers, not releasing their hold even when he rubbed the excess ingredients from his knuckles.

A tentative tapping followed by a quiet crack and down into the mixture a golden yolk went, bringing along its cohort of whites. Again the whisk started its staccato rapping against the bowl’s edge. By this time you were getting bored of the constantly repeated actions, slipping from the high stool opposite the cooking German. You went past him to the large fridge to retrieve the simple necessities for hot chocolate. Ludwig was so engrossed in his baking that to him, when you sat back down on the stool cradling a steaming mug, it seemed like you hadn’t even moved from your spot.

It took him a while longer for him to finish the batter and to place it in a tin, into the oven. In fact you were staring into the dregs of your chocolate milk when he started to make the creamy garnish to adorn the cake in all its cooked glory. After several minutes of serious beating, he set the tool down and licked off some of the cream that still clung to his fingers.

Taking the chance now he was occupied with something, you dipped a couple of digits into the cream; planning on stealing some and legging it before he realised. Sadly, this plan of yours, though ingenious, failed terribly. He’d caught sight of you mid-steal and had grabbed hold of your wrists before you could retaliate. All you could use as a decoy was the cream, so with no other choice you flicked it at his face. Most of it landed on his nose and temporarily distracted him, but that wasn’t enough.

Ludwig growled and moved to get hold of your waist, whereupon he then smeared some of his cream onto you. Letting out a shriek of indignation you twisted in his hold, kicking and squealing with laughter. He grinned down widely at you, leaning down to kiss off some of the otherwise wasted cream. You copied the gesture, standing on your toes and licking it away in a would-be sensual manner that sent the both of you into giggles.

In turn, he went after your ear, kissing it at first and then tugging on your lobe with his teeth in an almost shy manner.
“You do taste better, just as I thought.” He murmured quietly, his cheeks darkening to suit the poppies on his apron. Snickering softly at this, you pulled him down to your height, a wicked smirk on your lips. “Care to sample some more then?”
This was the second of the requests for :iconkomodo-dragon2:
I've written quite a few requests and devised plotlines for others! And even if it seems like I've forgotten you, don't worry! I'll get round to finishing them sometime C:

Please enjoy and comment with what you think, feedback is as always appreciated!
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:iconponydoesminecraft:
Ponydoesminecraft Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student General Artist
ohmygod it should be illegal to write this well
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sugarnspice567 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
Is that cake, by any chance, LEMON flavored
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Perchance!
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:iconheyimkait:
heyimkait Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ludwig growled and moved to get hold of your waist, whereupon he then smeared some of his cream onto you.

...... uhhhhhhh 0//.\\0
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh you! Not that kind of cream >////<
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:iconnals-luff:
Nals-luff Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh someone's gonna get laid tonight o3o >8D xDDD
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeedy!
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:iconanimelover20014:
Animelover20014 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Student
nosebleed   .............. Me and my perverted mind. love your story by the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much love! C:
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:iconkatniss-hp-twilight:
Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
whoa. woof. Ludwig. :iconiggybrowsplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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:iconlasercats6:
Lasercats6 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
This was so cute! I really enjoyed that! :D
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy to hear it love! Thank you!
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:iconlasercats6:
Lasercats6 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
your welcome! :)
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:iconglubbingjellyfish:
GlubbingJellyfish Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
This was pretty good! Very cute and fluffy with a hint of lemon. Lemon flavored cotton candy?
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Possibly! C:
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:iconnollit:
Nollit Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
I bet he's better in making slutty brownies than we do :(

:D
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Possibly D:
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:iconnollit:
Nollit Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
We can't allow this :stare:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Should we go beat him up?
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:iconnollit:
Nollit Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
Yes! ...After he learned us how to do it
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:iconvillainkomandr:
VillainKomandr Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Love it! Had good flow.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! C:
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:iconvillainkomandr:
VillainKomandr Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Student General Artist
You're super welcome!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconblackandbluerose:
blackandbluerose Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THIS....IS....GENIUS!!!! Good job!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so! C:
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blackandbluerose Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconnoproblemplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers love! C:
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:iconsushi-cutie:
Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh ho ho~ You sly dog, you~
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconwitchkayla:
WitchKayla Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is really cute!! :la:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so love! C:
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:iconwitchkayla:
WitchKayla Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You are very welcome! :D
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers love! :D
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:iconwitchkayla:
WitchKayla Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Cheers! :)
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NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The romance is high, it's so beautiful~!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! C:
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