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You smiled, playing with your fingers as you listened yet again to the reruns of Feliciano’s show. This particular one was about how he tried to learn how to dance, though his Japanese friend wasn’t that great of choice to be his dance-partner.

Humming along to Feli’s singing you wondered what it’d be like to dance. Well for that, you supposed, I’d have to be able to see. Or have someone I could trust no matter what.

“Bella!” You perked up and beamed as Feliciano’s footsteps entered the room. “How’ve you been bella?” His voice came closer to you when he hugged you tightly, smiling when you wrapped your arms around his neck.

“Better now that you’re here!” You chirped, grinning at him. He smiled back and chuckled sheepishly as he heard himself talk on the radio again. “You’re listening to this old stuff again?”

Nodding vigorously, you giggled. “Of course! Also this one is good. The dancing one?”

He snorted remembering it and the incident. “Si, in the end Antonio had to help me!” You recognised the name, he was a Spaniard that often featured in his stories. Feliciano heard you sigh, downcast at thought of not being able to dance.

He sat down on your bed and took your hands. “Bella? May I have this dance?” You turned your head, pulling your hands back slightly. “But I can’t.....”

“Don’t worry! I’ll make sure you won’t fall down, I promise. No I swear on my life I won’t drop you!” You snapped your head back up, a soft smile gracing your lips. “Okay.”

He helped you to your feet and took in your pyjama clad figure. You were about the same height, his shoes giving him a couple of extra inches. “Okay bella, we’ll do something simple.”

He placed his hand on your waist, bringing your hand to his shoulder. He stepped closer to you, closer than most people would, but he wanted to avoid losing his grip on you at all costs.

Your other hands stretched out, he began to sidestep and talked you through the moves.
“One step to the left. Yes, that’s right, now one backwards, careful! Now to the right and yes...”


After several almost falls and trips, you and Feliciano were happily dancing around the room. Of course it wasn’t that hard or impressive of a dance, but it still made you feel accomplished at the end.

Feli had hummed an song under his breath the whole time and as it came to a close, he held still, dipping you down.

You tightened your hold on him, tensing as if you were going to fall, but he merely bought you back up, your face bumping against something warm when you straightened up.

“Sorry!” you murmured, wondering what it was that you hit. “Don’t be bella.” His voice was low and you could feel his breath against your lips. Was he that close?! You felt something warm on your lips again and realised what it was.

When the kiss broke, you blushed stumbling backwards. He moved with you, setting you on the bed when the back of your knees buckled as they hit the edge.

“Say bella?” Feli asked, sitting down again on the mattress. “Yes?” You replied, searching for his hand. When you found it, he smiled sweetly and squeezed yours. “I-I’ve managed to get a few more shows. Good eh?”

“That’s brilliant Feliciano!” He chuckled, stroking your cheek. “The first show’s next week. Will you, will you come? Do you want to come?” He asked hopeful.

“How on earth can I say no to that! Of course!”

“Thank you bella.” You hugged him tightly. “It’s no problem at all!”

His arm wrapped around your waist, pulling you closer to him. “Then in case I don’t see you until then, can you give me some luck?” Smiling, you aimed for his cheeks, but he turned his head just as your lips were about to touch them.

His lips moved gently against yours and you pulled back, resting your forehead against his. “S-sorry I meant, I mean-“

“Ssssh.” He shushed you, one of his fingers on your lips. “It’s okay. In fact it’s better than okay!”

“Feli....?”

“That type of kiss is the luckiest!”
End is up ^^

This is because quite a few asked for a sequel~

Also, you don't really get the feel that reader-tan is blind, or at least I don't ^^"

Please enjoy and comment, I love reading comments

Part one:[link]
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:iconitalysaxis:
ItalysAxis Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So adorable! This is such a sweet story.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so lovey!
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:iconhetaliasicilyfan:
HetaliaSicilyFan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wonder if there is going to be a third part?
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is! I'm just working on it slowly! Sorry for that~
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:iconhetaliasicilyfan:
HetaliaSicilyFan Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's alright! Take your time and make it fantastic like the first 2 parts! I know what it's like to be working on a story because I'm writing one right now, but I need to try to end it with Cecelia surviving! Sorry! Got off topic! I look forward to seeing the next part! ;)
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:iconpoppykiller:
poppykiller Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Are they waltzing?
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah ^^
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:iconpoppykiller:
poppykiller Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Sweet! I love to waltz! ^_^
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is nice~^^
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:iconpoppykiller:
poppykiller Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Do you know how to?
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sort of, but I'm no good at all ^^
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:iconpoppykiller:
poppykiller Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Well I take ballroom dance so I know it is a hard dance... At first.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's very elegant though, well to watch it at least ^^
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:iconsilvia-x-gaara:
Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
daw~
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks love ^^
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:iconsilvia-x-gaara:
Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
welcome~!
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:iconowlstar7:
Owlstar7 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist
Awwwww! Feli why must you be soooo sweet?

I loved this!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He is just adorable isn't he?!

And thank you very much!
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:iconowlstar7:
Owlstar7 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
You are welcome!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers love!
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:iconvb-lurvs-gummy-bearz:
VB-lurvs-gummy-bearz Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Writer
:iconlazycryplz: Poor Reader-chan.... BUT LUCKY AS WELL.....
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Indeedy :'D
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:iconpokekid543:
pokekid543 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbleedrainbowplz: I'm so happy right now... you don't even know the half of it.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehehe I'm very glad to hear it!

......

Also I love that icon!
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:iconsixdripsofcirrus:
SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
…D'AWWWWWWWWW
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheheh :D
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:iconsixdripsofcirrus:
SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Lol :3
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:iconxtwisted-minds:
xTwisted-Minds Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsqueeeeplz: I love this little...twopartthingidkwhatitscalled! XP It was so cute! Keep up the awesome work! :D
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!

And yes, I will try to!
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:iconxtwisted-minds:
xTwisted-Minds Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem. ^^
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers! :D
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:iconxtwisted-minds:
xTwisted-Minds Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers indeed! XD
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconumioko:
Umioko Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, that was so adorable!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheheh thanks :D
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anonymouseling Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D'AWWWWW <3

ADORABLE <3
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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anonymouseling Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!

Can I just say, that I really think that leaving this as just a two-part is good, but I think that there's room for another part in there! It would be really cute, if the reader went to Italy's show, and then he does this skit-story-thing about where he met reader. I would be SOOO happy if you could continue~ but if you can't then it's fine ^^
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shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm that is a very nice idea indeed!

If I do use, I'll credit ya love!

Thanks for the amazing idea!
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anonymouseling Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOOO~! You're welcome!! As long as there's a part 3 I don't really mind XDDDD 83
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Stay posted~
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:iconanonymouseling:
anonymouseling Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Will do! 8D
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is really sweet
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheh thank you very much!
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:icontssweets:
TSsweets Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers :D
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:icontssweets:
TSsweets Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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EarlyRain Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i loved it!!!! your so awesome at writing stories/fanfics!!!!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hheheheheh >////<

Thank you very much!
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