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You grumbled rubbing your sore hips and waddling into the kitchen. “Oh hey Feli, Kiku.” You nodded at them in greeting and the two of them greeted you back in their own way, Feli glomping you and Kiku nodding and smiling politely.

You caught sight of the large blond and playfully smacked his arm. “Hey, my hips are still sore from yesterday.”

He snorted. “Can’t help it that you couldn’t come fast enough.” You stretched your aching body and rubbed your neck. “You’re just too big, you’re too strong for your own good.”

The two of you continued your banter as Kiku turned red. Kiku was already feeling jittery due to your appearance, your dishevelled hair and scantily clad body was enough to make his heart thump. Though now he felt annoyed, his face not betraying his emotions of course.

Too strong? Hips hurt? Too big? Kiku bit his lip, only able to imagine what you and Ludwig could’ve gotten up to. The more you two bickered, the more he felt pissed off and he stood up suddenly, not being able to stand the idea of you and Ludwig doing things like that.

He grabbed your wrist and pulled you away from Ludwig, sitting in the other room with you. His face was red, how could he have behaved so rashly?! And in front of you no less?! He trembled with embarrassment and anger.

“Kiku, you okay?” He huffed at your question, which was very uncharacteristic for him. “I should be asking if you’re okay, what with what you’ve been doing with Ludwig.” He retorted sarcastically.

You moaned slightly as you rubbed one of the tense muscles of your shoulders. “Can’t help it, the guy’s just too hard on m-“

“Enough!” He shouted, leaning forward to press his lips briskly onto yours. “Don’t talk about him like that ever again, I want to be the only one to do those sort of things with you.” He murmured, pulling back, blushing profusely.

“Kiku....What do you mean? Ludwig forced me to train with him and my hips still hurt from the running. Also, that was....my first kiss.....” You whispered, your fingers touching your lips as you flushed red.

His eyes widened in shock and he hid his face in his arms. Chuckling slightly, you patted his back. “It’s okay. I-I didn’t mind at all.”

You could hear him gulp and reply softly. “Re-really? Will you, will you be my girlfriend then?” He gazed up at you from where he lay folded on his knees.

“Of course!”
Yaay! Because I'm still sore from running at school (I suck at it TT^TT)

And because we passed the military base during the run, so this sort of idea popped into my head ^^

Please enjoy and tell me what you think, I love reading comments~
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:icondownshiftplus:
DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  New member Student Artist
Ah, Kiku. You pervy, PERVY man!
We are so alike!! *glomps*
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
Kiku.... Don't jump to conclusions.... But I love you because of your assumptions and pervy mind. :iconohyoublushplz:  
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:iconpeakswashere:
PeaksWasHere Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
Kiku is such a pervy country...
He really needs to stop reading Hentai...
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:iconpeakswashere:
PeaksWasHere Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
And all of those Lemon Fanfics...
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:iconforeveralive1:
ForeverAlive1 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Don't worry, I hate and suck at running too XD and I loooove stories that give you dirty thoughts as a joke XD
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:icondecembercat124:
decembercat124 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Most I've have ran was for 6 minutes then I passed out
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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:iconforeveralive1:
ForeverAlive1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
they're just so funny! how can chu not help but laugh!
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:iconevilangel3:
EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ok. Two things.

KIKU. GET YER FURKING MIND OUT OF THE GUTTER.

Two.

I WOULD NEVER DO ANYTHING LIKE THAT WITH LUDWIG EVEN IF HE ASKED. I just don't find him attractive.
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:icondecembercat124:
decembercat124 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Same here
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:icongoatgirl210:
goatgirl210 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
Amen~! xD 
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:iconevilangel3:
EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! Other hetalians that agree with me that Germany is NOT attractive!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
C;
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:iconevilangel3:
EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
SHASH YOUR FACE. :P lol
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:iconigame101:
IGame101 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He snorted. “Can’t help it that you couldn’t come fast enough.” You stretched your aching body and rubbed your neck. “You’re just too big, you’re too strong for your own good.”

Too strong? Hips hurt? Too big? Kiku bit his lip, only able to imagine what you and Ludwig could’ve gotten up to. 


brb cleaning my head with soap.
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:icongoatgirl210:
goatgirl210 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
I did the same don't worry. :3 
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehheheheheh
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:iconfurrykittys:
furrykittys Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Student Artist
Wait if kiku had drity thougts... And he said only he can do those things to reader chan... 0.0 does kiku want to have *lemon bleep* with reader chan?!? ...*lemon + perv thoughts + kiku + readerchan = .... Nosebleed* hurr~ durrr~
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:iconxiamawsomex:
XIamAwsomeX Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Student Writer
HUUUUURRR~~~
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:iconfurrykittys:
furrykittys Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student Artist
PERVY KIKU
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:iconhome7654:
Home7654 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O.O.... (Backs away slowly)
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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:iconthatrandomgirl7819:
ThatRandomGirl7819 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
KIKU! Well, I wouldn't be suprised if that actually happened between me and Ludwig......wat? I didn't say anything! *jumps awkwardly out nearest window*
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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:iconhetafan123:
hetafan123 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
I need to say... Kiku needs to get his mind out of the gutter.

Lovely story~!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He does indeed ^^

Thank you!
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:iconigame101:
IGame101 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
maybe he reads lemons jumps out window
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
perhaps he does!
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:icon321blueblossom123:
321BlueBlossoM123 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If the title hadn't been Misunderstandings and Sore Muscles, I probably would've had the exact same thoughts as Kiku~ xD
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehehhe C:
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:icon321blueblossom123:
321BlueBlossoM123 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:dummy:
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:icondarkmist1967:
DarkMist1967 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013   General Artist
Kiku=dirty thoughts
me= nosebleed
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheheh C:
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:iconchromaticadmin:
ChromaticAdmin Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh kiku we share the same mind (i thought the same thing as kiku to be honest)
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good! My mission was successful!
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:iconchromaticadmin:
ChromaticAdmin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
now we may have to part paths for some time our people need us *blastoff*
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:icondeerfluff:
deerfluff Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Kiku you dirty Kiku you! Hehehehheheh but, :iconbravoplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much love! c:
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:icondeerfluff:
deerfluff Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Yeap!
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:iconmysweetlies:
MySweetLies Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
:iconheplz:
Somebody has been reading dirty manga!!

Sis: *scoff* Look who's talking.

Me: S-shut up!!! I was bored!!!

Sis: :iconheplz: sure....
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're not the only one guilty of this.... C:
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:iconmysweetlies:
MySweetLies Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
:iconcryforeverplz:
I'M NOT ALONE!!!!
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:icontwifairy-noire:
Twifairy-Noire Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I love this one. I just realized Ludwig's probably wondering what Japan is talking about.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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:iconskittles-the-kitty:
Skittles-the-kitty Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Kiku, you and your dirty mind :iconheplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed :D
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:iconrinkumiyavisama:
RinkuMiyaviSama Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, that was so funny/cute! Seriously! I think you're my favorite author on here xD
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I-I am? That's so wonderful of you to say! Thank you very, very much ^////^
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:iconrinkumiyavisama:
RinkuMiyaviSama Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, you're very welcome!! And I meant it as well! ^^ I really think you do a wonderful job with your characters, especially Japan from Hetalia, (He's my favorite~ <3), you keep them in check and so funny haha!

Thanks for writing so well ^w^
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gosh, Japan is so sweet! He's so fun and adorable to write!

Thank you for reading my stuff love! :iconyuihugplz:
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