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Your breath rasped through your throat, your ashen complexion doing nothing to comfort the trembling man next to you. The look of pure pain on his face only continued to squeeze your heart with a vice-like grip.

“I wanted to protect you.”

No, it’s, it’s not your fault.  

“I should have been there to save you.”

You couldn’t have known, it’s okay.

“I’ve failed you.”

You’ve given me everything I could’ve ever wanted, how can you say something like that?

Emil rubbed his eyes roughly. “I only wish you could see her growing up.”

Yeah me too. You’ll take good care of her right?

“I promise I’ll do everything to protect her.”

Good. Get your brothers to help, though keep Mathias away from her, I don’t want her to be drinking beer so soon.

“I’ll bet I’ll hardly be able to get between them. Tino and Ber are already so attached. Big brother likes babying her too. I’ll keep Mathias away though, I don’t want his awful drinking habits to rub off on her.”

You’ll be a good dad, Emil. I know you will.

He cradled your cold hand in his own. “I don’t want you to leave me.” His voice cracked, his lips marked from where he’d bitten down on them.

I’ll watch over you, I promise.

“Will you tell me, give me advice when I do something wrong? I don’t want to bring up our daughter badly.”

Not that you’re going to need it Emil, but yes, I will.

“You were the best thing that happened to me.”

As you were to me.

A weak sigh escaped your chapped lips, your chest settling down for the last time.

“I love you and I always will.”

With the last strength that would ever flow through you, you smiled, tightening your grip on his fingers for a moment before releasing.
Your words came as a whisper but he heard them clear as day.

“Live for me.”
This was a request for :iconskylar-the-cat:

I hope I lived up to your expectation ^^

Also should I put an ideological thingemagic warning up? I wasn't sure if this was very upsetting or not

And if you were wondering the bits in italic are meant to be what you're thinking and trying (but failing) to convey to Icey.

Erm, I'm working on the France fic, but it's going a bit slowly..... That's why I'm writing all of this inbetweeny stuff ^^

Please enjoy and tell me what you think, feedback is as always greatly appreciated

Also if you want a hand in deciding which character and plot you read about next, please vote in the poll!
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:iconshadowyj:
ShadowYJ Featured By Owner May 27, 2013   Artist
How did I die? *cries insanely*.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You got into an accident I'm afraid lovey
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:iconshadowyj:
ShadowYJ Featured By Owner May 28, 2013   Artist
*cries in emo corner* its okay.
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:iconimaterribledrawer:
imaterribledrawer Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
T.T I died...
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry TT.TT
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:iconimaterribledrawer:
imaterribledrawer Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no, no, that's a good thing! wait- what? I mean, I like sad things, but I don't like dying and- I'm just confusing myself O.O
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheh it's okay!
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:iconimaterribledrawer:
imaterribledrawer Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah a little confusion is always good :P
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:iconlilybeth1235:
lilybeth1235 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Q_Q :cries:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry!
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:iconlilybeth1235:
lilybeth1235 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
No need to apolpgize its just so sad!!! Q_Q
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:icontheawesomehero7714:
TheAwesomeHero7714 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist
It's short yet it packs a lot of emotion in it. It's amazing! Very well written indeed. :D Good work as always!! ^_^
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much love!

:icnorubcheeksplz:
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:icontheawesomehero7714:
TheAwesomeHero7714 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist
Welcome. ^_^~
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:iconsorahsarah:
SorahSarah Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
so sad..... :'(
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry!
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:iconsorahsarah:
SorahSarah Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
no problem. When I read that I wanted just cry, so sad!
But you gotten much better!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy to hear I've improved!

^///^
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:iconsakuralover01:
SakuraLover01 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The feels!!!!!!! :iconcraiplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
TT.TT I know!
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:iconspookbaby:
spookbaby Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyuicryplz: S-sorry, Ice... Sorry!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
TT.TT
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:iconspookbaby:
spookbaby Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
QnQ
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:iconnekootakugirl:
nekootakugirl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconcraiplz: it's so bittersweet! waaaah TT__TT
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
TT.TT

I know ^^'
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:iconnollit:
Nollit Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
0.0
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know. ^^
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:iconkalliat:
kalliat Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwwwww so sad
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry. I know :iconcraiplz:
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:icond-girllegend:
D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Soo sad :'( (but well written)
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and yes, I know ^^'
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:icond-girllegend:
D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no problem :) x and uh huh the feels ;P
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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:icond-girllegend:
D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Skylar-The-Cat Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Kya~!
So cute!
I am now currently crying my eyes out at 7:00am because that fic was just so.... jfhkxbdjskd jsb. Amazing. Thank you!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was my pleasure *bows*

Thank you for requesting it and giving me the opportunity to write it love ^^
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:iconskylar-the-cat:
Skylar-The-Cat Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
*Bows dramatically and thus, falls over*

No problem~ Though really I'm the one who should be thanking you. <3333
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
S'okay love!

Any opportunity to write is brilliant!
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:iconfrenzydaydreamer11:
Frenzydaydreamer11 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconangryjapanplz: how did i die?! I dont want to leave my emil and daughter!!! U killed my feel
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry TT.TT
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:iconfrenzydaydreamer11:
Frenzydaydreamer11 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
im depressed now.....
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm double sorry!

:iconsnugplz:

Hmmm, how can I make you smile.... Like this?

:iconrainbrowsplz:
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:iconfrenzydaydreamer11:
Frenzydaydreamer11 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconiggyblushplz: maybe ~ >\\\>
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D

Good!
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:iconsuucelestiadensen:
SuuCelestiaDensen Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'M TRYING TO BRAID MY HAIR- I'M NOT SUPPOSED TO BE SOBBING AND WAILING AND BAWLING AT A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN STORY-DRABBLE-ONESHOT-THINGYMABOB. KJKESRHFKRDUHKHGHCGRHSREGHRGREIUCYJCDJREHNJJRGHUKIRGGRENIHGKJFKHXFEFAHUEFFWE
My heaaarrrttttt...
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry love :iconcraiplz:
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:iconsuucelestiadensen:
SuuCelestiaDensen Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's alright... ;=;
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here! Will this make you smile?

:iconrainbrowsplz:
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:iconsuucelestiadensen:
SuuCelestiaDensen Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
... *sniffle sniffle* His eyebrows are rainboowwsss... ;u;
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yush ^^
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