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I wonder who’d care
If I’d crash and burn
At this very moment.

Because
I no longer do.

Because
I no longer have the fight in me,
Like an engine without oil,
I’m out of juice.

I feel cold.
Numb.
I wonder what’s wrong with me.

I wonder why I’m still here.

I wonder about these tears rolling down my cheeks,
I wonder if they’re a sign.

I wonder if I've given up.
I feel as though I have.

And yet
My body’s still moving
Drawing haggard breaths
That rattle into my aching, empty skull.

I wonder why.
This will be deleted later.

Need-to-vent.
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rockthearts14 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful <3 if you need someone to listen, you can always send me a note.
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GraciaTheirin Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Don't take it down it's actually really cool to see this because I've been feeling the same way lately
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DewDropDrips Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013   Photographer
There is such a poignancy to this poem, a hollow beautiful sort of sadness that rings through the words you've chosen. I truly hope you find the reason you're here, we all have one, and that you don't take this down. It's amazing.
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CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please don't delete this later... I'm sure that many people would love to read your poetry (me included!). It's totally relateable for lots of people. And just so you know, a lot of people really would care. Until just recently, I thought that no one would give a shit as well, until I vented - just like you - and found out that people may just be too shy to tell you so at first. So please don't give up just yet c:
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soulesspoet365 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I found your questions whilst rereading my own works, I may not know you but after a quick glance through your stats I'd say that there are many circles of people who'd be effected.
Everyone you hear from on DA, your Family (even though it may not feel like it), people you know, the people you care about and the people you could meet in the future would all be effected by this one event.

I know it feels like no one cares (I've known this all too well) you wonder why you are still here, what have I got left to achieve, why am I forced to go through this everyday this pain and why does it feel like I've given up.

I'm also searching for the why I've given up answer, so I'll quote 2 people ( [link] ) and ( [link] ) both videos are inspiring enough for me to carry on.

No I'm not good at this life thing, that's why I came to DA looking to vent, looking for answers sometimes we simply just don't have them :/
I dunno if this all ^ will make you feel better but I hope it helps you carry on.
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TheAwesomeHero7714 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist
It's very good to vent. This is completely reasonable and I'm sure there are others that can relate to you. You shouldn't delete this; I'm sure there are people who would love to read this. I hope everything gets better. I surely cannot imagine what you're going through. All I can say, is that everyone here is willing to support you in whatever way you need. :)
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nanci16 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
wow, i totally relate...
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know how u feel
And it's always good to have a way to vent your emotions
I know there are a TON of people who care about you so DON'T GIVE UP NO MATTER HOW HARD IT GETS BECAUSE THINGS CAN ONLY GET BETTER!
And have a nice day!!!
:)
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