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Two things and two things only occupied Roderich Edelstein's mind.

One of them was of course his beloved piano, the one he played to pieces whenever he had the chance. He loved the feeling of the ebony and ivory under his fingers, the reverberating chimes that surrounded him.

The other was you. Not that you knew of course, but your denseness was something that he adored as well.  Whenever he played his instrument, the reason he was so absorbed by it was simple; when he played, he imagined you under his fingers.

His imagined versions of your moaning, trembling for him as he moved his hands over the keys were so real to him. That was the reason.

As he was too cowardly to properly talk to you, he merely watched you as you spoke to your friends, classmates... It was pretty clear the Austrian had a thing for you, to all but yourself. Most of Roderich's friends urged him on to talk to you, but whenever he tried, he'd clam up and stutter something incoherent.

And though you thought he was cute, he'd had enough. He was going to tell you what he did to you in his mind whether you liked it or not.

The bell rang and Roderich stiffened, knowing it was time for his possible doom. Stiffly he walked towards you and tugged on your shirt. "I-I need to talk to you...."



You sat on a stool next to his piano, your ankles crossed. "So what did you want to talk about Roderich?" He bit his lip to hold back a shudder that your saying his name elicited. "Yo-you'll see." He murmured and turned to the keys.

The song he played was so full of passion and obvious love, all you could do was stare at his fingers in wonder. When he came a particularly expressive part, his face flushed red, his lips quivering slightly.

You reached out to him, concern flickering in your eyes. But before you could touch him, he shook his head fervently and you retracted your arm again.

He finished the song and after closing the lid, he rested his forehead on it. For a reason he was panting quite badly. You put your hand on his shoulder and shook him a bit. "Roderich? Are you okay?"

He held your hand between his own and pressed kisses on your knuckles. "I wanted to show you what you do to me." He looked at you sideways, his purple eyes glazed over with lust. His lips still touched your hand, gently kissing it.

A blush rose to your ears as you saw him sit up slowly, turn towards you and lean forward. He moved your hand to his neck and pulled you closer to him, pressing his lips against yours needily. Your face flushed dark red as Roderich nipped at your bottom lip, tugging on it.

"Whe-whenever I'm playing, I see you." He confessed, his forehead leaning on yours. "I can see your adorable blushing expression in front of me as you ask me to come closer. You moan my name for me and it makes me feel," he swiped his tongue over your lips now, tasting you," hot."

You blushed at hearing that he'd thought of those things. Truthfully, you liked him. He was very shy around you, which you thought was cute and now you knew why.

He pulled you on top of his lap, your back against the piano. "Now take responsibility." He said, then added with a smirk; "I'm going to make you feel just how hot you make me."
Written simply because I'd love to see a flustered Austria :D

Please enjoy and tell me what you think~

Decide in the poll who you want to see next!

Part two: [link]
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
I want there to be more fics were hes actually a perv. Its funny.
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yandereobession Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
*faints*
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LondonKirkland101 Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Student Artist
O/////O
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ZaniZannaDragonQueen Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
I-I.....o//////<
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husuivermilion Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
#wespazzlikemadzz
♥/////////////♥
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Aniel301 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
X///////^//////O
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KykyGhibli Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1]Llama Emoji-10 (Shy) [V1] Blush Excited Blush  That was permazute(pervy, amazing, and cute)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rasberry24 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
Umm....Very good.....>/////W/////<
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shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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zorosky Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
*rams head into wall makes dent in wall turns around and has nose bleed and face dark red*
MAKE LEMON PART 2
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shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Erm I did... but I've taken it down.
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BeigeCascade Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHOOHOOOOO 
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
c:
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PonyGutBag Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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Very.. good. Um.. THISWASREALLYPERFECTINEVERYWAY
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Writer
*slams head against the wall leaving a hole as I leave my heading hanging there my motionless body just hanging there as I then scream it sounding a little muffled*


OH MEIN GOTT WARUM IST DAS PASSIERT,
WAS LOS IST ICH WERDE STERBEN WARUM
MÜSSEN SIE MIR DASANTUN SIE IDIOT
EINES NARREN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay I got most of that, but I have to ask what does 'dasantun' and 'Narren' mean?
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Student Writer
*lifts head out of wall* honestly I don't even know anymore........*slaps self* DAMN YOU BRAIN FETISHES!!!!!!!

Brain: Hey it ain't my fault it's your hormones fault girly ^_^

stfu or else I shoot you =_=

Brain: NOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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FiWithASmile Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bleedrainbow  ERMAGERD!!!!!  I'm dead.  This was so awesome I died.
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shihachii Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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CanadaWannaBeFriend Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well ... that's a change, BTW make a part 2. Lemon lemon lemon lemon lemon LEMON :iconlemonplz: :iconglompplz:
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shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
There is a second part lemon! .... Somewhere....
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1AishaTakahasi1 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, THERE IT IS, YAY!
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1AishaTakahasi1 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Where's my FUCKING lemon, bro? XD
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Animelova4evs Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
PeerrrffeeccctttCrazy Girl (Rolls) [V2] Kyouko Toshinou (Imagining) [V1] Kyouko Toshinou (Sparkle Nose Bleed) [V1] 
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shihachii Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! C:
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NirvanaRivera Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What!? Austria's not portrayed as a snobby poo? *claps* thank you. Thank you for making one of my favs a good story.  
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shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, you're very welcome love! C:
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crazy-anime-fandoms Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Squee attack*
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shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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crazy-anime-fandoms Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehehe~
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Holy shizam, are you TRYING to give me a nosebleed? xDDD Geez, even lemons don't get me so embarrassed!!!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Muhahahhahahaah
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But Austria is probably the only exception... We actually have a lot in common... -_- I guess that's why? Even though everyone calls me Russia. xD
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Mistie15 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Wow I hope you can add on to it zat vas hot!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you C:
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Kuraudia-Ve Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eeeeee~! Major squee lol
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shihachii Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheh C:
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romatalia412 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsadaustriaplz:
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shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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Saphire-ruby21 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was about to go crazy until I saw part two of this.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehehhehe C:
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ILIKEFICKINGSHEEP Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ohohohohoho~
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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1010603 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Me likes.
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy to hear it lovey!
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RoseEmma1 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Pervy Austria is so...........smexy o////o
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehehehe ^^

Thank you!
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Mitzonikku Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconaustriaplz:> :iconpervyaustriaplz:
Me: Austria. Go. Home. You're. Drunk.
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shihachii Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehehehe >\\\\\<
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