Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×

:iconshihachii: More from shihachii


Featured in Collections

France Stories by FallenLily366

france by hetafan123

canada francis by lovekitsunenaru


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
April 13, 2013
File Size
7.6 KB
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
9,234
Favourites
308 (who?)
Comments
149
×
There you were. Francis’s breathing instantly starting quickening and his flashy suit was making him feel constricted. The bouquet he was holding starting slipping from his now sweaty grasp so he laid them on the table he was waiting for you at. He watched as you turned a couple of times, your beautiful eyes searching for where he was.

He could have raised a hand to tell you he was there, but for a moment he was absolutely entranced by you. The way you looked for him, almost desperately when you still couldn’t find him, it set his body on fire.

He honestly had no idea why it was that you had such an effect on him, but he couldn’t deny what he felt. It was something much more than carnal lust, something infinitely more complex than the bodily desires he’d always experienced when around other women.

When he was around you he felt the inexplicable urge to hold you tightly against his chest, stroke your silken hair gently and count the beats of your heart. To kiss every inch of your stunning form, to love you thoroughly. So why was it that whenever he was around you, his mind span in circles and he couldn’t manage to string a coherent sentence together?

The happy, relieved look of recognition appeared on your face as you saw him and you quickly made your way to beside him, a wide grin on your face. “Hi!” You said in greeting, blinking when he stood up with a flushed face. “B-Bonjour,” he replied, bowing for you whilst taking your hand in his and pressing a kiss on the back of it.

His toes curled at the soft contact of your skin and his lips. Perhaps he lingered too long in that stance as you gently patted his shoulder. “Are you alright?” You asked, worry tingeing your tone. “Your face is red,” you commented, standing on your toes and pressing your hand to his forehead. His sapphire eyes widened.

Reaching up, he pulled down your hand and kissed the palm. Just seeing you makes my ‘eart beat faster. Francis opened his mouth to tell you the cheesy, but truthful line but he froze. His words seemed to catch in his throat and he hesitated greatly, not wanting to seem like an idiot by standing there and just gazing at you open-mouthed.

“Maybe you should sit down,” you murmured, guiding him to his seat and sitting down opposite him. “Are you sure you’re alright?” Now zhat you’re ‘ere my sweet, everyzhing is alright. Francis gulped to clear his throat and managed to mumble something no one could have understood.

Smiling sweetly and apologetically in return, you inclined towards him and shook your head. “I’m sorry, but I didn’t quite catch that Francis,” That melodious ring of his name made him snap out of his stupor and he shifted, trying to find something to do.

“Ah! ‘Ere,” he started when he remembered the flowers and he held them out for you. “Thank you very much,” you replied, holding the flowers carefully and gazing at them gratefully. “You shouldn’t have,” Ah, but ma petite even so, I would ‘ave. Not zhat zheir beauty is anywhere near yours zhough.

“Pas de problème,” he answered, mentally kicking himself for such a lame answer but cheering as he didn’t stutter. “So why.... did you call me out today?” You questioned, resting your cheek on your hand as your other hand ghosted over the pretty petals.

“I-I,” he began, his blush returning with a vengeance. “I-I just wanted to see you,” he murmured, fidgeting and pulling at his tie nervously. A small giggle let your lips and you smiled at him. “I wanted to see you as well,” you told him, a scattering of pink dusting your cheeks as you gazed at a flower between your fingers.

Your expression gave him a surge of confidence and he reached forward, plucking the flower from your grasp and tucking it behind your ear with a small lock of hair. “Stunning,” he cooed, letting his long fingers trace the line of your face before he pulled back.

You caught his hand as it fled across the table, holding it between your own and allowing your fingers to dance to the rhythm you hummed quietly under your breath. He chuckled and interlaced his fingers with yours, squeezing them resolutely.

“Ma chérie, I cannot tell you ‘ow ‘appy I am when I’m around you,” he said, his free hand cupping your cheek. Placing your own to keep it there, you smiled lovingly at him. “I like being around you too, you always make me laugh,” you muttered, moistening your lips slightly as you waited for him to answer.

“And ‘ow I love seeing you laugh. It’s as if zhe sun comes out from behind some clouds,” he murmured, his confidence coming back. That’s right! Tell her how you really feel! “My ‘eart beats so fast when I’m around you et I can’t help but smile when you look at me. I feel so silly at times, but-“

Placing a finger to his lips, you interrupted him. “That’s not silly at all,” He smiled warmly and kissed your fingertips.

“You’re so sweet,” he started, kissing down your fingers to your palm and then pressing a quick kiss on the inside of your wrist. “I suppose zhat’s zhe reason why I love you so much,” He froze as did you. Heat crawled over your skin and you stared at him. Did-did he really?

“Francis I-“
“Je suis desolé! I-I didn’t mean-“
Your heart sank. Was it just like always when he was surrounded by women? Did saying those words really come so easily to him? “Francis,” He glanced up at your sad tone with a worried set of his jaw.

“Do you mean it?” You asked, staring at your lap and disentangling your hands from his. “Oui. I do.” For once his voice didn’t waver.

Tears pooled in your eyes and you could sense him worriedly flail about as he tried to do something to cheer you up. “I’m sorry to spring zhis on you so suddenly, mon amour. I didn’t mean to make you cry.” He whispered, pulling you to your feet and bringing you to sit on his lap, not caring at the strange looks you two obtained from the surrounding people. It was like no one else mattered, all Francis cared about was you and getting rid of your tears, so that there was space on your face for one of those cute smiles of yours.

“I hate seeing your tears,” he told you, wrapping his arms around you and rocking you as though you were an upset child. “It’s alright,” you sniffled. “I’m happy.” He smiled joyfully, resting his nose in the crook of your neck. “I am too,” he pressed a tentative kiss to your collarbone, making you squeak in surprise.

“Couldn’t stop myself,” he admitted sheepishly, brushing some hair from your face and simply gazing at you. “Here,” he placed your hand on his chest. You gazed at him in wonder, feeling his hammering heartbeat under your touch. “That’s how much I love you,” he murmured, leaning up to you to peck your lips chastely. That first kiss was one of many, that bore passion and love in many varying degrees.
Because I felt like it (I'm sorry if I doesn't make much sense, but I was in the mood for it)

Please enjoy and tell me what you think, feedback is as always appreciated!
And if you want to have a hand in deciding which character and plot is used, please vote in the poll!
Add a Comment:
 
:iconkomeko-chan:
Komeko-chan Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I don't read much for France, but when I do Im always pleased with what I find. There are such sweet stories for him. I feel like he is sorely misunderstood. Very cute story! Not at all confusing; short, sweet, and to the point.
Reply
:iconearlgreyishere:
EarlGreyIsHere Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member
*glances around to make sure no one is looking and kidnaps Francis*
Reply
:iconyaoiboyzrthebomb:
YAOIBOYZRTHEBOMB Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist
Awwwww!!!!Hug Love La la la la  Francis is such a romantic!!!!!!Love Hug :happybounce: I love it !!!!!Clap :happybounce: Heart Super wicked auwsome job!!!!La la la la Clap Hug 
Reply
:iconginathefaceofawesome:
GinaTheFaceOfAwesome Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is one of those fanfictions that make you take a step back and seriously ask yourself, "Have I really fallen in love with an anime character?!"
Reply
:iconsuperwholock421:
superwholock421 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Student General Artist
And then you think about how desperately you want them to be a real person :c
Reply
:iconginathefaceofawesome:
GinaTheFaceOfAwesome Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty much. Then you ask where your life is going and from there its just sucked into an oblivion.
Reply
:iconrevolutinarywarfeels:
*squeals uncontrollably* GDUKASGDIUASGCIUQSGCUIQWGDUIQGUIQAGDQIUAGDIUQWCG *Dies*
Reply
:iconlullabyly:
lullabyly Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student General Artist
It's 4 am in italy and I'm Fangirling sooo much!!! your stories are so cuuuute!!!
France needs more loveee
ve~
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much love! And he does!
Reply
:iconlullabyly:
lullabyly Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student General Artist
my pleasure!
and...FRANCE FANGILRS UNITE! :iconspartaplz:
Reply
:iconart-lover221:
Art-lover221 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Oh so sweet! I laughed at the pas de probleme I could just imagine him facepalming at that part. :)
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and yes, usually he's more smooth! 
Reply
:iconmirror-7:
MirroR-7 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
HNNNNNNNNNNGGGG :iconloveloveplz: CUTENESSS OVERLOAADD
.
.
.
your work... awesome as always ;3
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much love! 
Reply
:iconneigma:
neigma Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student General Artist
"That's 'ow much i love you." This is so sweet!
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so love! C:
Reply
:iconneigma:
neigma Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
Reply
:iconbutterfingas:
Butterfingas Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Gah! Amazing! I love your writing style and how you describe things. Thank you for writing such an amazing story :iconwabplz:
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying such kind things ^////^
I'm very happy to hear it!
Reply
:iconkarks1992:
karks1992 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Aww it's not often you see Francis stuck for words great story
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so lovey!
Reply
:iconkarks1992:
karks1992 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
You're very welcome :)
Reply
:iconthe-secret-fangirl:
The-Secret-Fangirl Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Writer
OhmyGodohmyGodohmyGod.
I am drowning in the cute.
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
Reply
:iconbluelight01:
BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My Goshness!!!!!!
This was SO CUTE!!!!!!! I love how you wrote France!!!!
:iconyayfranceplz:
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's so great to hear! Thank you!
Reply
:iconbluelight01:
BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!!!!
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers lovey!
Reply
:iconjesserfly:
Jesserfly Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god. That's... so.... T wT beautiful!
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gosh, thank you very much! ^\\\\\^
Reply
:iconjenaoda:
Jenaoda Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconbravoplz:
I love this story! It practically brought tears to my eyes, it was so good! Very well done!
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so incredibly happy to hear you say that lovey! Thank you!
Reply
:iconjenaoda:
Jenaoda Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! :)
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers lovey!
Reply
:icondreameater55taker:
Dreameater55taker Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ihonestly love this side of Francis so much while it annoys me when they other writer turn him into a womanizing drunk pervert. :iconsexyfrance2plz: thank you for the lovely story that if my brother was not dead asleep in the other room would have me rolling on the for giggling with joy, and he, my brother to my dismay sleep inthemiddle of the day and sleeps for frecking ever. Now with my rant overi will continue on reading more story's with reader-chan :iconbyeplz:
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like writing him like a hopeless romantic ((though I enjoy writing him as a drunk and a womanizer as well.... how strange am I? Perhaps I just like the multiple facets of his personality O.o))

I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it lovey! Thank you!
Reply
:iconkaraouq:
Karaouq Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome :)
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so lovey!
Reply
:iconkaraouq:
Karaouq Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome :D :D
Reply
:iconaskevaberzski:
AskEvaBerzski Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I should call the DA police on your for attempting to suffocate me with this Fluffyness!!!! But, since I loved this so much, I'll just punch you in the Favorite button ^.^

Loved this, Author-chan!!!
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so lovey!!

And please don't call the police on meee!
Reply
:iconakasunayuki3:
AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
You're trying to kill me aren't you? No wonder theres so much fluff cx
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
Reply
:iconmadibear6:
madibear6 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're the best, love!!
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much sweetie :iconmoesmileplz:
Reply
:iconmadibear6:
madibear6 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
just speaking the truth!!
Reply
:iconumioko:
Umioko Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wha, how adorable. > u< !!
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much lovey!
Reply
:iconcharleywren:
Charleywren Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is best thing
Reply
:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much lovey!
Reply
Add a Comment: