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Pressing against your lips with subtle force, Francis’ tired smile twitched his lips up when he hear you begin to stir with a moan. As though a dashing of crimson paint had been splashed across your cheeks, you blushed when you saw your Frenchman hovering over your form. A whispered ‘Bonjour’ in your ear was all it took for you wind your hands in his hair and reclaim his lips.

“Morning.” You cooed back and he chuckled, ruffling the blond locks that cascaded onto his shoulders. His muscles flexed as he rolled his shoulders and stretched, yawning loudly.

You touched your lips, a thought forming itself in the crevasses of your mind. Actually know that you were actively thinking about it, the more it confirmed your belief. “Francis?”

The bed shifted due to his weight and creases surrounded where he sat on the plush cover you were still cocooned in. “Oui?” A soft caress down your cheek was accompanied by a loving glance. “I’ve noticed something about your kisses...” you started and his expression was instantly one of panic.

Had he done something wrong without knowing?!

His Adam’s apple bobbed as he gulped audibly and his eyebrows twitched as he leaned closer to you, the tips of his blonde hair tickling your neck.

“ ’A-‘ave I done something wrong? Is there something you dislike about my kisses?” Had he gone perv on you and freaked you out?!

You reached up to frame his face in your smaller hands. “Not at all, I just noticed something... you have many different types of kisses, don’t you?” His flustered mannerisms calmed down and he let out a sigh of relief.

“I suppose.” Pursing your lips, you shot him a glance from under your lashes. “Care to tell me what you mean with each one?” You asked hopefully, biting the side of your lip as you waited with bated breath for his answer.

The corners of his mouth curled upwards and he eagerly pressed his lips against yours. “That was a kiss to say you’re cute.” He brushed his lips over the edge of your mouth. “To say I want to know you both inside and out.”

You blushed and he changed it to more chaste kisses. Trailing his lips across your cheeks, he murmured; “To wish you only the very best for the rest of the day.”

Nipping along the side of your jaw, he closed his eyes; simply enjoying the feeling that you were all his at that moment in time. “To tell you you’re more stunningly beautiful than any other person I ‘ave ever met.”

Gently pressing his forehead against yours, he kissed your lips which were trembling in anticipation. “To say I adore you with entire being.”

Finishing off, he gave you that lopsided grin of his which as always went with that peculiar laugh of his. The fact that his laugh was so strange only made it more alluring to you though.

“I’ve got even more kisses of course.” He raised one of his eyebrows and bent down to peck your lips. “But then again, maybe we should just run through those previous ones.” His lips nuzzled into the base of your neck and he gently peppered your collarbone with kisses.

“You know, so that you won’t forget any one of them.”

A gentle laugh bubbled past your lips and you lost your hand in his hair. “That sounds like a good idea to me.”

Cerulean eyes shining with your answer, Francis made sure that you would never ever forget the meaning of his kisses.
Errm, yeah I sort of tried a different style of writing ^^"

(Please tell me if you can tell.... if you please!)
An idea that popped into my head and I figured Francey-pants would fit the part~

Please enjoy and tell me what you think, feedback is as always appreciated!
And if you want to have a hand in deciding which character and plot is used, please vote in the poll!
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:iconfemdenmark92:
Femdenmark92 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Hot chocolate kisses - stay sweet and dont change
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:iconemilyevangeliner:
EmilyEvangelineR Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Adorable. France is my favorite character and I feel that this for him perfectly. Nicely done my friend.
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:iconjazzylick:
JazzyLick Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Different types of kisses? Let's see here, there's milk chocolate, white chocolate, white chocolate swirl, caramel milk chocolate, cookies and cre-
Oh, you meant-
Wait, what?
Oh, no, I'm not forever alone...
:iconforeveraloneplz:
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:iconmileytu4:
MileyTu4 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
:iconomgyayamericaplz: lol.  It's okay. I did the same thing. :icononewithrussiaplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheheh
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:iconalucardftw5:
AlucardFTW5 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aw! that was sweet ^^
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much lovey!
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:iconotakugirl14:
OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Again Again Kiss me Again 
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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:iconotakugirl14:
OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
XD
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:iconhetaliafangirlneko:
hetaliafangirlneko Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconsexyfrance2plz: :D (at a loss for words)
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy to hear it lovey!
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:iconhetaliafangirlneko:
hetaliafangirlneko Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^//////^
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:iconfyreflare:
Fyreflare Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Writer
:iconglompsomethingplz: :iconsexyfranceplz: I love this. Soooo much.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad to hear it love!
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:iconclockworkbirds:
Clockworkbirds Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hear that?
That was my hair.
Being ripped out of my own chest by the cuteness of this.
Ohmigodithurts ;-;
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:iconthetruekeitastic:
TheTrueKeitastic Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
Why do you have chest hair? D:
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:iconclockworkbirds:
Clockworkbirds Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
hEART MAJOR TYPO HEART IT'S SUPPOSED TO SAY HEART
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nuu!

Don't hurt yourself!
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:iconclockworkbirds:
Clockworkbirds Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*heart



wth auto correct.
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hate, hate, hate autocorrect!
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:iconfmaandkhfangirl:
FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconifaintplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheh ^^
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:iconfmaandkhfangirl:
FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Filmographer
I love France ~~~~~<3
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He is amazing!
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:iconfmaandkhfangirl:
FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
Siiiiiii :iconmonkeyloveplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconfmaandkhfangirl:
FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
<3
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:iconphoenixofwinterfell:
PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
That's so sweet~ I love France more than ever now~ :iconloveloveplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I adore him ^^

And thank you very much!
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:iconphoenixofwinterfell:
PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Writer
Yes! Someone else! And no problem at all~
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D

Yeah, France really is nice =u=b
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:iconenbi-to-miruku:
Enbi-to-Miruku Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Words aren't enough to describe how much I love this. For a person who can't stand sappy stuffs to me, I must say that I'm impressed. The overall theme fits Francis perfectly, keeping him in character while bringing out the best side of him. You nailed every single details, and oh how I love your use of words! Your story really got me 'trembling in anticipation'. Thank you so much for writing such an enjoyable reader insert!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome love!

I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it :D
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:iconsexyanimelover:
sexyanimelover Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I absolutely adore this! It is so romantic and tender...Just perfect. I love it so much. No words. :3
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks love :D
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:iconskye-pixie:
skye-pixie Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Precious!
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heheheh thanks :D
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0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OK, that is...so, so, so, ridiculously adorable. SFASDGAHFASHDGFASDGHJFASGHDAFJ.

Oh, but this here: “To say I adore you with entire being.” - shouldn't it me "with my entire being"?
C:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Corrected it~

Thank you again my daughter/ editor :D

And thanks :iconsnugplz:
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0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem~

That icon is ridiculously cute XD
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yush, yush it is :D
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:icon0-emoleopard-0:
0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I mean seriously.

Just look at it.

:iconsnugplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Jup :D
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darkcherry264 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Oh my gosh I loved this!
Now if only instead of me it was Arthur..... :iconevilplz:
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh you!

....


Man that would be so perfect :D
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:icondarkcherry264:
darkcherry264 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
That would be amazingly perfect... I looove FrUk to death
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is such a cute couple :iconsqueeeeplz:
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:icondarkcherry264:
darkcherry264 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I kno! I just adore the vwhole love/hate thing
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Jup ^^
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