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Lutz’s violet eyes widened. You cringed as you gingerly pressed your fingertips to the sore spot on your face. His knees wobbled and he fell to the floor in front of where you’d fallen. His hands open and empty, he trembled as he stared at his handprint on your cheek.

“T-Tut mir leid.” He breathed, then reached out to you and gently wrapped his arms around you, pulling you to his chest. “Es tut mir leid.” Repeating that single sentence over and over, he buried his face in your neck.

You could feel his trembling and you instinctively cupped his face, stroking the scar everyone judged him on. “It was just an accident Lutz, it’s okay.” You bumped your forehead against his and tried to smile, though the throbbing ache on your cheek made it hard to do so.

You didn’t really understand how or what exactly had happened, it had all gone too fast but in any case all you could remember was this; you were about to walk into the kitchen after hearing Lutz shout something angrily in German.

Why you didn’t know, which was the reason you were looking for him in the first place. Before you knew it something hard had struck you across the face and you’d been sent flying across the floor.

It seemed as though Lutz had flung his arms out in anger and you having just arrived at the worst moment had had his hand smashed into you.

“It’s okay, it was an accident, you didn’t mean to. It’ll be okay, I promise.” You murmured, half wondering why you were the one doing the comforting. He gazed at you with pain filled eyes and bit his lip. “I’m so sorry, so so sorry.”

You kissed his forehead. “It’ll go away in no time, I’m telling you.”

Unfortunately however, it seemed Lutz’s guilt only got worse each time he looked at you, so much that he felt a pang go straight through his heart whenever he caught you feeling up your injury. In fact he seemed so crestfallen, that you couldn’t even make him crack a smile.

Just before you were going to leave, you took a stance in front of him, your hands on your hips. “Lutz, I’m not angry at you and I’m not hurt either, so just...-“ You broke off, not knowing how to finish.

Standing on your toes, you yanked him down by his collar and vehemently captured his lips with your own. As you’d caught him off guard, it took him a moment to realise what was happening but no less than a second later, he closed his eyes and gently started to move his lips against yours.

The carefulness he was treating you with was different than usual, now that he had experienced firsthand what it was like to actually hurt you. He gripped you closer as though you were made of the finest porcelain and if he held you too close, you’d break just like that.

The kiss broke and Lutz pressed you back down on your feet, his self-reproach evident. “Auf Wiedersehen.” He mumbled, watching sadly as you turned and left. Hopefully, you thought, he’ll be back to normal once the mark’s gone.






And even though the mark did start to fade, you had yet to show your blond German. Your roommate and friends were now prohibiting you from seeing him as they’d completely misunderstood what had happened.

They believed he had struck you willingly and was not an ounce remorseful, whilst in the meantime Lutz was agonising over what he’d done to you and he took the fact that you hadn’t come over or called him as a way of a breakup.

He’d locked himself in his house ever since you’d left that day, barely venturing out to get food and surviving pretty much on only beer.

You on the other hand were becoming increasingly irritated at your friends’ poor ways of keeping you away from him. They’d taken you out shopping, seeing films at the cinema and other such things.

But you couldn’t keep your mind off him, obviously as you were worried sick about him. You knew what he was like when his conscience got the better of him and you knew he needed help or someone with him at the very least.

So after five days of not being allowed to see him, you escaped from your makeshift prison. Stealthily, you’d sneaked out of the back door and you’d ran as fast as your legs could carry you, all the way to Lutz’s house.

If he’d been able to see you, he’d have been proud.

Clutching the stitch in your side, you panted, trying hard to slow your rapid breathing and your pounding heart. Having rung the bell when you’d arrived in this state, you were still waiting for him to open up. But he didn’t show, not even after you’d repeatedly pressed the doorbell. You were positive it worked as you could hear the shrill sound echoing in the hallway.

Tapping your foot, you rang it again and again and again. He couldn’t have gone out? Maybe he had, I mean he has got a life of his own.... you pondered. Your shoulders sagged with sadness. And after all I did to get to see him...

Turning around to get back home, you jumped when you heard the door click open. “What do you wan-“ Lutz was cut short when you bounded onto him, hugging him tightly. “I missed you so much!” You whispered, nuzzling it his neck.

Lutz stood nailed to the ground, his eyes wide and dilated as he stared down at you. “(y-y/n).” He muttered, then reached up to stroke your hair softly. “(Y/n).”

He hugged you back tightly, closing the front door with a kick. Hiding his face in your hair, he trembled, still feeling guilty. “Enough of that.” You told him off, shaking your head at him. Taking his hand, you placed it over your bruise. “See, it’s almost completely gone.”

Breaking at your smile, he wound his arms tighter around you. “I sought you’d left.” You ran your hands down his back, smiling; you finally felt complete once again. “No, my friends wouldn’t let me see you. They thought you’d hurt me on purpose, when I know you didn’t.”

He relaxed in your arms, feeling warm once again. He’d missed that feeling when you weren’t around. As you felt him over, you realised suddenly that he was only wearing a pair of slacks and a dirty pair at that.

Pulling back to get a proper look at him, your thumb stroked the crescent scar on his cheek. “God, Lutz, look at you.” You mumbled, your eyes trailing over him. His violet eyes were bloodshot and unruly stubble extended over his jaw, his blond hair was greasy and in desperate need of a wash as was the rest of him.

You sighed and tugged him along to where you knew his bathroom was. “Let’s get you clean.” He smirked and with that you could tell he was nearly back to normal. “Only if you get in wiz me, meine Frau.”

With a giggle and a raised eyebrow, you nodded once and closed the door behind the two of you.
Okay so I read somewhere that 2p Germany could be really rough, but that if he hurts you he feels really bad. That's what I went on for this ^^

Hope it was okay and hopefully more 2p will be coming your way~
Please enjoy and tell me what you think, feedback is as always appreciated!
And if you want to have a hand in deciding which character and plot is used, please vote in the poll!
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DC-Katya-Jones53 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  New member
this is so cute ohmygoooddnesssss
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Hopelessness444 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
Omg I love this we need more fanfictions like this <2 good job!
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014
Due to my crap eyesight I get hit randomly or I hit things/peole by accident.. So i wouldn't mind if that happened... And I could tell myfriends I didn't see a pole or somethin
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SamnthaBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Student Writer
Oh no... I hope we don't slip in dat shower...Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] 
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cassidog2 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
My friends: U CANT SEE HIM ANYMORE!

Me: ok... *Goes to room* *sneaks out window* *Runs* I AM DA BEST NINJA EVA
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SamnthaBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Student Writer
HELLA YES NINJA LYFE 4EVA!!!
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cassidog2 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
ERMEHGERSH YUSSSSSSS
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SamnthaBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Student Writer
ERMEHGERD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconcassidog2:
cassidog2 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
YUSSSSSSSSSS (lol, i cray cray)
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:iconsamnthabeilschmidt:
SamnthaBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student Writer
((LOL so am i)) Sanity is Overrated 
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:iconcassidog2:
cassidog2 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
(HIGHFIVE!!!!)
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SamnthaBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student Writer
((Whpsh))
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puppypaws12121 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Student Writer
I want to go in there and slap my friends from keeping me away from meine Lutz! Good story, I couldn't stop smiling.
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PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lutz is like a sour patch kid. First he's sour then he's sweet.... :) I love this story.... imma favorite...
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SuddenlyPINEAPPLEZ Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
You just subscribed my favorite character in existence with my favorite candy...
ohmygodIloveyou. O3O
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:iconprussiaskitten:
PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
FRUK YEAH!!!APH Nyo America 
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XxStoneXxWingsXx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
That's going to be one nice shower. Perverted Suggestive 
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Wolverina22 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student Writer
I can't wait to get in that shower.Fool Emoji-21 (Sexy Dance) [V1] 
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crazygurl5302 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Student General Artist
You just made my day!
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shihachii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconiggybrowsplz:
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:iconsamnthabeilschmidt:
SamnthaBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Student Writer
Those eyebrows tho....
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sarahsmiles16 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
I love this comment so much!
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Wolverina22 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
It's so funny:sparklygrin: - PLZ 
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MauMuto27 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Aaaaaaaaa! I hate it when people act all horrible because they accidentally did some thing to hurt you. but Lutz just makes it look sexy! XD
Danisnotonfire: FEELS  
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The feels indeed!
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:iconmaumuto27:
MauMuto27 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
LOL!
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iamcatheryn Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I swear. Lutz is a big, cute, sensitive, perverted, drop dead sexy, human teddy bear with magical powers of love.
....
[Sibs in the distance because I need part two]
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
He is indeed!

sorry sweetie, but this is from ages ago, so I'm not going to add another part!
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:iconiamcatheryn:
iamcatheryn Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Shhh it's okay. I,m really lazy so I don't look at dates help
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:iconiamcatheryn:
iamcatheryn Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well shoot. In forgot the end slash help
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Femicelandhetalia Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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ClaraaDrowned7789 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
this is the 140th time ive seen this today and i agree with u Shihagami they r fake Not True it gets on my nerves
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:iconshihachii:
shihachii Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay first off I don't even believe in this crap and secondly could you not post anymore of these on any of my things.
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Lowcc Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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koujakulation Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Hello, my name is none of your business. I am suffering from seven rare and deadly diseases, poor scores on final exams, fear of being mauled by squirrels, and guilt for not forwarding out 50 billion chain letters sent to me by people who actually believe that if you send them on, then that poor 6 year old girl in Arkansas with a potato growing out of her forehead will be able to raise enough money to have it removed before her redneck parents sell her off to the traveling freak show. Do you honestly believe that Bill Gates is going to give you and everyone you send “his” email $1000? How stupid are you? Ooooh, looky here! If I scroll down this page and make a wish, I’ll meet the girl (or guy) of my dreams tomorrow! What a bunch of junk. So basically, this message is directed to all the people out there who have nothing better to do than to send me stupid chain letter forwards. Maybe the evil letter leprechauns will come into my house and write “I’m a moron” on my forehead in permanent marker in my sleep for not continuing the chain which was started by a knight of the round table and was brought to this country by midget pilgrims on the Mayflower and if it makes it to the year 2000, it’ll be in the Guinness Book of World Records for longest continuous streak of blatant stupidity.  If you’re going to forward something, at least send me something mildly amusing. I’ve seen all the “send this to 50 of your closest friends, and this poor, wretched excuse for a human being will somehow receive a nickel from some omniscient being” forwards about 90 times. It’s getting old. Show a little intelligence and think about what you’re actually contributing to by sending out forwards. Chances are it’s your own unpopularity.
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TenderAbsynth Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
Finally someone intelligent. 
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shihachii Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, first off I don't have a true love and secondly, I don't believe in crap like this anyway.
Please don't post anymore of these on my stuff.
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marshallee1fangirl Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hhmmmmm a part teo of the lemon sented veritay would be nice indeed
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shihachii Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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lunarLover88 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohonhonhonhonhonhon~ 0u0
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shihachii Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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lunarLover88 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
huehuehuehuehuehuehuehuehuehue Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] Fool Emoji-14 (Pervy Crazy Dance) [V1] 
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Hetalialover101anime Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love Tight Hug .:Naughty Thoughts:. Nosebleed emoticon :nosebleed: 
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shihachii Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Hetalialover101anime Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
[nodded]
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Faustita Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
Poor Lutz :) It was an accident :) -laughs at the part where he asks me if only you get in wiz me,maine Frau  XD Loveet :D
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shihachii Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy to hear it love! C:
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:iconfaustita:
Faustita Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Your welcome! :)
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CandyBlueStar Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Cutest story ever xD xx
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shihachii Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for saying so love! C:
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